Any suggestions? I know better to ask. No one ever gives me any. I thought about doing a real story. But I know some of you like the generic things with no names.
Published in: on July 1, 2010 at 8:42 pm  Comments (2)  

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  1. I like your stories so whatever moves you the ones you have posted recently really makes me quiver

  2. Change the point of view. Don’t be generic. Give your girls some spine. Use visceral language. Don’t skip over the details. It’s not enough to know that you fucked a girl’s ass. Tell us how. Tell us how it feels and looks and sounds.

    College is great, by the way. I’m back home in Charleston for now but I’ll be back to school up north in late August.

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